I'll get right to the point. The 2008 English translation of the Roman Missal looked very good, very promising.
The 2010 text, on the other hand, looks atrocious. It is full of errors and oddities and other problems that just make it ugly and stilted. Please, please, please give us back the 2008 translation. The 2010 text is going to result in an absolute disaster. Eyes (and heads) will roll.
Important Update: the linked text is from April. It is not the final revised version of the text that we are eagerly awaiting. But it goes to show you what sort of translation was approved for use back in 2010! How did it get such approval with all these serious shortcomings?!
Lord almighty, help us out here!